Compare and Contrast

Overall, I believe that I think I did a wonderful job overall writing this paper. I can also say that this was one of the most difficult essays. I say this because I was confused on how to get information from two different people on the same topic but who has different view based on that topic.

I think that I could have had more than my mother to look over my paper because after submitting my paper, I felt as if I didn't put my all into it because I was still a little confused after finishing the essay.

Also, I think that I could have used more example that each of the critics stated because it felt like I was just going on and on with the paper. My grammar throughout the paper was used properly I was told after submitting the essay.



Compare and Contrast

Single Text Analysis

This essay was one of the hardest essays for my to write. This is because I didn't understand the concept of the essay and also I couldn't find a single text in any magazine. When I couldn't find a single text, I began to feel unprepared because while everyone was writing their essay, I just began writing my thesis sentence.

When the essay was done I felt proud of myself because it felt like I had finally accomplished what was in my heart for two weeks but at the same time, it felt as if there was some information that was needed in the paper after writing the essay. I kept thinking to myself that after getting plenty of information from my parent and several magazines, I should have added more example how Little Richard was treated and how he became who his is today. Lastly, I was told that my punctuation was improving.



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Annotated Bibliography

This essay was very confusing. I really didn't know what I was suppose to do when I was told about this essay.

I feel that since I was confused I didn't put my all into this essay. I feel that my sentence structure wasn't as good as the rest of my essays. Also, I believe that if I could change anything, I would be the was I wrote my essay. I believe that my essay is written as if I was in the 8th grade. Lastly, I can honestly say that I could have used better vocabulary.

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Literary Narrative

I believe that my paper turned out really well even though I think should told more in depth examples of how my life was while living in Chicago and when I moved to Joliet. At the time of writing this paper, I thought that by giving too many examples, it would loose the interest of the reader. Now looking back I believe that I should have told how I really felt behind close doors about the moving process.

After writing my paper, my teacher didn't reply to paper with a lot of questions and concerns because of how good my paper was written. Even though this was one of my best essays, I still believe I could have increased my vocabulary.


Lit Narrative1

What should schools allow?

Pam Meo Turner who is a teacher at W. C Handy Head Start in Florence, Alabama. Pam is worried about the congress not acting soon enough about the issues their facing. Pam is worried that if congress don't act early about the situation, then the school would be shut down. W.C Handy Head Start believe that every student is important and they believe in helping students become successful. If the school shuts down for good, Pam worries about the students who's learning how to write there name and worried about students that's learning how to tie their shoe. If the school shuts down then students wont receive the necessary an proper help they need from outside resources.

 

I agree with Pam and the petition she established. I support this petition because I believe that our children is what holds the future. If you don't help them now to become someone in life who will. I believe that by the congress not addressing this issues would bring upon more issues. This is because by shutting the school down will cause problems with the school district and with parents of the student because their not getting the necessary help they should be getting from outside resources such as teacher and counselors.

Feminist

The Nutty Professor

In the movie the Nutty Professor, there is a woman name Carla who Sherman Clump loved dearly and would do anything for.When Carla showed up in the movie, it made Clump to change his physical appearance. He loved her dearly, so he decided to lose weight so that she could date him.

 

 

Ever since she came into his life, he's changed and wanted to better his life and his health.

Now regarding feminism, Carla don’t play a huge role in the movie. When you look over the movie, you realize she's the only woman in the movie and when she do show up, her script isn't very long or intense.

Carla play the girl who is there to hopefully date Clump. Throughout the movie, you only see Carla when she's with Clump for with his family. The outcome of this is that women aren't important in society or in movie.

 

After all, Carla shows no growth in the movie. On the other hand, the growth that is shown in the movie is how Clump changed his physical appearance because of the way her felt for Carla.

 

 

Maturity

In the story "Midway" there were two brother's name Junior and Luis who were basically left in the world alone to provide for one another.

Maturity is the key.

The top right picture explains how their father left his family when the two of them were young. There father didn't give his wife and children a in depth reason on why he was leaving. Since the father left his family, this left his wife to raise their children alone.

In the middle right picture, it elaborates how later, as the two of began to age, their mother kicked them out of her house. By the mother kicking her two son's out of her house left the oldest bother Luis to take care of his little brother Junior and to pay bills.

The outcome of the father leaving his family at early on in life led Luis to mature at a young age because he was left to take care of his little brother who is known for stealing other objects.