I believe that my paper turned out really well even though I think should told more in depth examples of how my life was while living in Chicago and when I moved to Joliet. At the time of writing this paper, I thought that by giving too many examples, it would loose the interest of the reader. Now looking back I believe that I should have told how I really felt behind close doors about the moving process.
After writing my paper, my teacher didn't reply to paper with a lot of questions and concerns because of how good my paper was written. Even though this was one of my best essays, I still believe I could have increased my vocabulary.
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After writing my paper, my teacher didn't reply to paper with a lot of questions and concerns because of how good my paper was written. Even though this was one of my best essays, I still believe I could have increased my vocabulary.
Lit Narrative1
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