Remix

This video is a remix of my literacy narrative essay that I did earlier own in the school year in my college english class. My paper was about me and my family moving from Chicago to the suburbs and how it affected my life. Instead of hearing my side of how I felt about moving, my mother is telling the story from her point of view.

Argument

I believe this was one of my best essays yet. I felt comfortable writing my paper based on the topic I chose. I was able to get a lot of information from the critics that posted their opinion on the website which had me more eager to write my opinion in my paper.

After I submitted the paper, I read over it again and it felt like my opinion wasn't clearly stated but others told me different such as two teachers and my mother who read over my paper. Deep down, I believe that I could have added more examples of my own to get my opinion across.

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Literacy Analysis

When I began writing this essay, I was confused on the way the teacher wanted the essay written. This essay took a toll on me and had me stressed because I couldn't find enough example to prove my point.

Also, I think that I could have used more examples from the story to get my point across on how the two characters are similar and how their different. Another thing is that I believe I could have asked for more help and with is essay. While writing this blog, I believe I should have had my teacher add input on my essay knowing that I was confused going into this essay after submitting it. Over all, I believe this essay could have be written differently if I knew what I was suppose to be writing about.

Literacy Analysis

Compare and Contrast

Overall, I believe that I think I did a wonderful job overall writing this paper. I can also say that this was one of the most difficult essays. I say this because I was confused on how to get information from two different people on the same topic but who has different view based on that topic.

I think that I could have had more than my mother to look over my paper because after submitting my paper, I felt as if I didn't put my all into it because I was still a little confused after finishing the essay.

Also, I think that I could have used more example that each of the critics stated because it felt like I was just going on and on with the paper. My grammar throughout the paper was used properly I was told after submitting the essay.



Compare and Contrast

Single Text Analysis

This essay was one of the hardest essays for my to write. This is because I didn't understand the concept of the essay and also I couldn't find a single text in any magazine. When I couldn't find a single text, I began to feel unprepared because while everyone was writing their essay, I just began writing my thesis sentence.

When the essay was done I felt proud of myself because it felt like I had finally accomplished what was in my heart for two weeks but at the same time, it felt as if there was some information that was needed in the paper after writing the essay. I kept thinking to myself that after getting plenty of information from my parent and several magazines, I should have added more example how Little Richard was treated and how he became who his is today. Lastly, I was told that my punctuation was improving.



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Annotated Bibliography

This essay was very confusing. I really didn't know what I was suppose to do when I was told about this essay.

I feel that since I was confused I didn't put my all into this essay. I feel that my sentence structure wasn't as good as the rest of my essays. Also, I believe that if I could change anything, I would be the was I wrote my essay. I believe that my essay is written as if I was in the 8th grade. Lastly, I can honestly say that I could have used better vocabulary.

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Literary Narrative

I believe that my paper turned out really well even though I think should told more in depth examples of how my life was while living in Chicago and when I moved to Joliet. At the time of writing this paper, I thought that by giving too many examples, it would loose the interest of the reader. Now looking back I believe that I should have told how I really felt behind close doors about the moving process.

After writing my paper, my teacher didn't reply to paper with a lot of questions and concerns because of how good my paper was written. Even though this was one of my best essays, I still believe I could have increased my vocabulary.


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